Story by Monyonge O’kebati

Jubilee Party Leader and presidential candidate Dr. Fred Matiang’i has attended the enthronement ceremony of Archbishop Dr. J.J. Gitahi at Priesthood Fellowship Church (PFC) in Kahawa West, Nairobi.
The ceremony marked a significant milestone for the church, formally ushering Archbishop Gitahi into his new role of providing spiritual leadership, guiding the faithful and overseeing the ministry’s activities.
The event was presided over by Archbishop Dr. Gerry Kibarabara, alongside PFC General Overseer His Grace Bishop Mwangi Zakayo, and brought together clergy, church leaders and congregants to witness the occasion.
Matiang’i congratulated Archbishop Gitahi on his appointment, extending his best wishes to the new church leader as he begins his tenure.
He also congratulated the entire PFC fraternity, praying for God’s wisdom, strength and guidance for Archbishop Gitahi as he takes on the responsibility of leading the church and serving its congregation.
The enthronement underscored the church’s commitment to spiritual leadership and service, as members welcomed their new archbishop to the position.
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